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chez wrote:
...feels blurry to me, gives me a headache looking at it...


I'll take that as a compliment Chez.

We all know photography is subjective as I think your comment might highlight. For me it is the sky that made me have to process this one! I have a tendency to sometimes gravitate toward wild, dynamic and surreal in imagery. An apology beforehand if it makes some go to their medicine chest for ibuprofen!



Jan 19, 2014 at 02:39 PM
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John Richter wrote:
Hi Mark,

This is a wonderful shot. I like the clouds showing movement beneath the stars.

As far as Venus goes, I like it with it because it's supposed to be there. What I do with the moon when it's on the edge of the frame making it egg-shaped, is to push it back to round. This looks like a case for that tool on Venus and it's reflection.

John


Thank you John. Actually on another forum someone gave me nearly the same feedback. They really liked Venus and even its position in the composition but they suggested correcting the orb shape to a round shape. I so agree and wish I had thought of it before posting it. I will do this on the original when I get back home. Again, thank you for the feedback.



Jan 19, 2014 at 02:42 PM
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Mark Metternich wrote:
"Celestial Bend" (NOT Horseshoe Bend) 30 seconds 1600 ISO.


Mark: this is a great shot and I like the version best without Venus. A shot at 15 sec would have tightened up the stars which show modest elongation. Well done, Dave

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Jan 19, 2014 at 04:28 PM
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Awesome photograph. Amazing photograph. I'm itchin' to get out west!
I like Venus accurately proportioned which is hard to do given its great brightness, so the cloned version is my fav.
I think with the clouds, the coma is not that noticeable. Do you prefer the canon 14 to the samyang?
Great shot.

David



Jan 19, 2014 at 06:57 PM
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p.2 #5 · p.2 #5 · Celestial Bend


The removal of Venus was a good move. Wonderful capture Mark.
Fred



Jan 19, 2014 at 07:17 PM
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p.2 #6 · p.2 #6 · Celestial Bend


Night shot of a familiar scene. Very nice!


Jan 19, 2014 at 10:50 PM
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Because it's so bright Venus was kind of a "sinkhole" for the eyes; at least, it was for mine. Cloning it out keeps the eyes moving around the photo and emphasizes the great detail in the rest of the image. Good job.


Jan 20, 2014 at 01:10 PM
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dgdg wrote:
Awesome photograph. Amazing photograph. I'm itchin' to get out west!
I like Venus accurately proportioned which is hard to do given its great brightness, so the cloned version is my fav.
I think with the clouds, the coma is not that noticeable. Do you prefer the canon 14 to the samyang?
Great shot.

David



Hi David. Thank you very much for your feedback.

Yes I definitely prefer the Canon 14mmL2 over the Samyang or Rokinon 14mm. It is as sharp as it gets and less distortion (distortion usually does not bug me much though). But at the price different of $350 vs $2350 ish well I'd advise people to go with the cheapy until they can afford the big daddy. Only on an enlargement print are going to see a real difference. One really funny thing I just noticed as I was doing some research on the 14mm, is that if you punch "Canon 14mmL2" into Google MY name comes up 6 times on the first page! I must be (and have been) a great advocate for it! Now to get Canon to pay me something! Lastly, I also use the Canon 16-35L2 a lot because it is easy to polarize. Because of this I have never needed to go with the Nikon 14-24. That is a truly amazing lens, and I have used it, but I just never felt it necessary.



Jan 20, 2014 at 02:48 PM
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John Richter wrote:
As far as Venus goes, I like it with it because it's supposed to be there.



Mark,

John's point is so spot on to me. I'm a newbie/wannabe landscape photographer, but also a seasoned journalist, so it confuses and surprises me when people seem so quick to want to clone out elements or alter a scene. Some of those folks will say I just don't understand "art." Hmmm, I think all art offers context, which Venus does in this shot. Its presence, as well as its reflection, gives this image a genuineness, as well as a uniqueness. I admire your work because you always strive to provide an alternate take.

Besides, asthetically, I like Venus, the moon's reflection and the movement of the clouds as juxtapositions against the still and very detailed landscape.

Glenn



Jan 20, 2014 at 04:19 PM
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gnbuzz wrote:
Mark,

John's point is so spot on to me. I'm a newbie/wannabe landscape photographer, but also a seasoned journalist, so it confuses and surprises me when people seem so quick to want to clone out elements or alter a scene. Some of those folks will say I just don't understand "art." Hmmm, I think all art offers context, which Venus does in this shot. Its presence, as well as its reflection, gives this image a genuineness, as well as a uniqueness. I admire your work because you always strive to provide an alternate take.

Besides, asthetically, I like Venus, the moon's reflection
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Thank you Glenn.

I know this comes up all the time. I just posted a great small article by Seth Godin about it on my Facebook page - but here it as as a direct link to his blog:

http://sethgodin.typepad.com/seths_blog/2014/01/the-humility-of-the-artist.html

Art is Subjective and it makes no sense to try to please everyone. That approach will make our work averagey at best and we may even lose who your are as an artist in the process. I just take it all in, carefully consider it all (and appreciate that people are taking precious time out of their lifes to give the feedback) then decide what I agree with for the vision of what I am trying to accomplish with the image.

For Venus I see a strong argument for both, that is why I put two up there. But, as I have mulled over all the feedback very carefully, so far, I like the image as is but I could see a little more sharpening in the sky stars and my preference would be to make Venus more round, which I will likely do in the print. I am at peace with the fact that my work will never be everyones cup of tea. Neither will anyone else's and that is actually a good thing! I believe that when we try to make our work everyones cup of tea we ruin our work and frustrate ourselves. I love what I do and plan on keeping it that way. So, I accept other viewpoints for what they are and always try to learn something from them.




Jan 20, 2014 at 06:14 PM
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excellent shot Mark.. #2 for me


Jan 21, 2014 at 04:57 AM
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Not sure how I missed this shot man, but it rocks! I love the look from below the top ridge. It makes the canyon feel a lot bigger in photographs then it usually does. I agree with removing venus. Maybe it would work better if it was 25-50% the size.


Jan 21, 2014 at 09:01 AM
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gnbuzz wrote:
John's point is so spot on to me. I'm a newbie/wannabe landscape photographer, but also a seasoned journalist, so it confuses and surprises me when people seem so quick to want to clone out elements or alter a scene.


One of the tensions in photography is - no doubt you've heard! - the presumption that it shows us the real.

Not so fast.

Particularly in night photography, the idea that a photograph presents something that was there and does no more is problematic. If you have ever been in a place such as the location of this photograph on a full moon night - and I suspect that quite a few of you have - you know that you do not really "see" anything remotely like this (or like the two recent images by this photographer that include human figures on a playa in full moon light). It is very dark, and portions of the scene would border on being invisible. The stars would not pop out like this, especially on a full moon night.

But a literally "real" photograph (which I presume means one that faithfully reproduces what we would see if we were there) would be nearly black, with only a few points of light, and much of the image in perhaps the lower 10%-20% of the luminosity range.

Is that what we want? I don't think so.

One of the fun things about night photography is that we are photographing things that we cannot see. Instead we are seeing what a camera can see. Clouds and stars blur, moving objects can completely disappear, colors that our eyes do not register in low light do register on the camera, we adjust the luminosity to use the entire range provided by camera/sensor/print. Essentially by definition, night photographs are not real - and this is as it should be.

Regarding the choice about Venus, I don't quite get all of the teeth-gnashing about it. At a different hour on the same night or at a different time of year, Venus would not be there. The light from the planet is a transitory thing in the image, almost the same as if a hiker's flashlight had placed a spot of light in the image or an airplane had flown through a corner of the sky. While I understand that there are some who think that such things should always be left in the frame, their's is a distinctly minority point of view, and few photographers aside from journalists operate that way or have worked that way in the past.

And, am I the only photographer who sometimes envies painters? I was at the David Hockney exhibition in San Francisco this past weekend, which included many of his very large landscapes. (And a lot of other stuff, too.) The power of his paintings seems undeniable, and what they express about his relationship to the landscape is very real. Yet his color palette is anything but realistic in the photographic sense. Are photographers forbidden from using color in similar imaginative ways as they use photographic means to create visual art? (There is the question of the implied realism of photography, and here photographers have to be careful with "truth" in a way that painters do not.)

If photography were to be about nothing more than accurately "capturing" the supposedly objectively real thing in front of our camera, photography would be very nearly worthless as art or as a means of expression. In fact, just about the only value it would have, could it do this and should it aspire to this, would be to provide a thin and unsatisfying substitute for experiencing the real thing for those who cannot be there.

So I say, "Take Venus out if it improves the photograph."

Dan

(And, no, I do not believe that absolutely any form of "manipulation" and so forth is OK in all cases. There are contexts for this, but the subject is likely too big to discuss here.)

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Jan 21, 2014 at 09:32 AM
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I have to agree with Dan in his assessment of night photography. I did a full moon shot just this week and it's a style I have been working on for 3 years. I have always tried for a dark sky bright land effect. Marks brighter treatment of the entire scene opened my eyes. In fact I posted mine at Post Processing because it was not successful and I wanted help.

In that post I noted Marks pair of images as an example that showed we are using the moon to provide light that has a special quality that we can't get in daytime. If our eyes had the light gathering ability of a long exposure, the sky would not be dark, so we should not attempt to make the sky as we see it while striving for bright terrestrial objects.

Mark must have already understood this because of his exposure choices. I typically try for the lowest ISO possible and still get the shot. have made moonlight shots at ISO100 and f5.6, where Mark went to ISO1600. I wish I had. I shot mine at f4, ISO640 and 10 Seconds. I am always afraid of noise.

As far as Venus goes, I like it either way. I consider this a makers choice.







Jan 21, 2014 at 10:11 AM
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Very nice. Kinda an eerie feeling to it. Would like to find the time (and energy) to put myself in such a position.

Jim



Jan 21, 2014 at 11:16 AM
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Justin Grimm wrote:
Not sure how I missed this shot man, but it rocks! I love the look from below the top ridge. It makes the canyon feel a lot bigger in photographs then it usually does. I agree with removing venus. Maybe it would work better if it was 25-50% the size.



I think you hit it on the head. A lowered luminosity for that planet would have allowed it to be there but not so prominent. Not a hard thing to do in post production. I will do that. As always Justin, thank you. Now if I had only thought of that myself!

Here goes. I also put it in the initial post as the final revision:







Jan 21, 2014 at 03:34 PM
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Huge thanks to everyone for the feedback. I will try to respond to everyone.


Jan 21, 2014 at 03:39 PM
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gdanmitchell wrote:
One of the tensions in photography is - no doubt you've heard! - the presumption that it shows us the real.

Not so fast.

Particularly in night photography, the idea that a photograph presents something that was there and does no more is problematic. If you have ever been in a place such as the location of this photograph on a full moon night - and I suspect that quite a few of you have - you know that you do not really "see" anything remotely like this (or like the two recent images by this photographer that include human figures
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Excellent Dan. Loved it. "Instead we are seeing what a camera can see."



Jan 21, 2014 at 03:43 PM
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Jim Sanderson wrote:
Very nice. Kinda an eerie feeling to it. Would like to find the time (and energy) to put myself in such a position.

Jim



Thanks Jim. I hope you get the chance.



Jan 23, 2014 at 01:42 PM
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fantastic!


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