Evan Baines
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I was tempted just to say that this was "so good," but I think I'll take a minute and explain why its good.
First, you've nailed the timing perfectly of you son stepping off into the air. He hasn't started to fall or compensate yet, so it honestly looks like he could walk on air. A second earlier and it wouldn't look like he was actually as committed, a second later and he'd be falling or trying to catch himself. Perfect.
The framing behind him as he takes a step is perfect.
Your other son behind him with his hand up, perhaps miming a push, but also maybe suggesting some sort of prayerful stance... Along with that, the artwork in the background also suggests some sort of crown. He almost suggests to me the officiant of a ceremony in which your other son is taking part... a test of faith perhaps.
Compositionally, the extra space below is key. I'm not sure why, but the tilt doesn't bother me in the slightest. Perhaps an ascent also plays into the religious imagery I'm getting.
Its just a fantastic frame.
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), and they immediately jumped on and started dancing...
