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Oregon Gal
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I haven't been shooting for quite awhile, other pursuits keeping me busy but here's a recent one I managed to get. A conversion to dark Sepia with various other adjustments, single image. Thoughts, suggestions welcome. I would be happy to post the color version if anyone is interested.

Thanks, Barbara







Jun 07, 2013 at 11:29 PM
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p.1 #2 · Step Back in Time


At first it seems a little heavy handed ... but then it kinda grows on you.

As you journey through it, you just kinda forget all about the PP and enjoy each of the "memory lane" aspects, that the different elements invoke ... a tasty smorgasbord of old stuff.



Jun 08, 2013 at 12:42 AM
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I think its great Barbara.
Plenty to savor. I like the busy-ness of it all.
To my taste the vignette bottom and the intensity of the sepia is a bit much. But that is only to MY taste. I would suspect it has good sales potential.

Nice to see your work!
Scott



Jun 08, 2013 at 09:09 AM
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+1 @ sales potential ... I was thinking it needs to be printed on tin.


Jun 08, 2013 at 09:52 AM
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p.1 #5 · Step Back in Time


Hello Barbara,

Good to see you back. Neat location. A bit over-cooked for me but certainly lots to observe.

I'll have a go at the color version if you have a chance,

Best,

Bob



Jun 08, 2013 at 05:05 PM
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I appreciate all the feedback. Yes, I agree it's overcooked deliberately, catering to club competition, I did back off the saturation, contrast, vignette and opened up the shadows a touch. I have added the color version per Bob's request.











Edited on Jun 09, 2013 at 06:14 AM · View previous versions



Jun 09, 2013 at 12:58 AM
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p.1 #7 · Step Back in Time


Wow! The recession is even worse than I thought. <ducking>


Jun 09, 2013 at 02:38 AM
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You mentioned the heavy handed approach due to a club competition. I cannot help but remember seeing the same trend in the club I belonged to a couple of years ago. At first the heavy processing got some attention. Then it became more and more outrageous. Finally the heavy handed approach went out of favor with the judges and other photographers. I also never understood the old car/old barn issue. I can't remember seeing anything approaching a realistic presentation for an old car. Every image seems to be heavy hdr, and/or Topaz and other effects to achieve the gritty, garish appearance. Plenty of the images were also converted to monotones. I guess the old saw is there is no accounting for taste.


Jun 09, 2013 at 08:28 AM
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Oregon Gal wrote:
I appreciate all the feedback. Yes, I agree it's overcooked deliberately, catering to club competition, I did back off the saturation, contrast, vignette and opened up the shadows a touch. I have added the color version per Bob's request.



Perhaps? Not sufficient space to level wo clipping car.

Thanks for the color post...

Bob







Jun 09, 2013 at 09:21 AM
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p.1 #10 · Step Back in Time


Lots of ways to go with something like this ...







Jun 09, 2013 at 10:07 AM
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p.1 #11 · Step Back in Time


Perhaps a B&W version with duplicate of the color version added back with a saturation blend layer at 50% opacity?







Jun 09, 2013 at 02:50 PM
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Camperjim, camera clubs have a way of liking the over processed images. I don't mind a well done push processed image but I really dislike seeing halos, or artifacts that can appear when an image is incorrectly processed. Appreciate the thoughts.

Bob, I did use perspective straightening in CS6, a little cropping and a touch of cloning. I agree it might be a tad tight in regards to the sides of the image. I do like your rendition.

Kent, thanks for the re-work and I like your approach.

Karen, never thought about processing the image like you showed. I really like the effect, plus the change in perspective and crop makes the image appear to have been shot from a lower angle.




Jun 09, 2013 at 03:54 PM





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