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p.1 #1 · Little flower power

Amaryllis...C&C welcomed.

Thanks for looking,

Bob

Jun 01, 2013 at 05:12 PM

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p.1 #2 · Little flower power

Very nice, Bob.
What would you think about removing the bright green stem bottom to the left of the center petal? Maybe clone out the diagonal shadow extreme upper right corner?
Scott

Jun 01, 2013 at 05:36 PM

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p.1 #3 · Little flower power

sbeme wrote:
Very nice, Bob.
What would you think about removing the bright green stem bottom to the left of the center petal? Maybe clone out the diagonal shadow extreme upper right corner?
Scott

Thanks Scott,

Happy you enjoy it. I'm trying to practice and improve technique.

Perhaps something more like this?

Regards,

Bob

Jun 01, 2013 at 07:19 PM

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p.1 #4 · Little flower power

Nice. I think your revision is even better.

Jun 01, 2013 at 07:44 PM

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p.1 #5 · Little flower power

much improved, including darkening the large stem
nice work
Scott

Jun 01, 2013 at 08:42 PM

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p.1 #6 · Little flower power

I like the revised version better. Maybe some minor tweaks to reduce the noise in the background and bump the gamma in the lower right and retouch the edges where color bleeds and sharpening leaves a very slight edge?

Jun 01, 2013 at 09:52 PM

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p.1 #7 · Little flower power

Jim & Scott,

Thanks for your follow up comments, and suggestions for getting there

Bob

Jun 02, 2013 at 01:54 PM

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p.1 #8 · Little flower power

@AuntiPode,

Thanks for your re-work. Very nice, delicate touches.

As always, your discerning eye for color points out things I'd never see, and sometimes still don't

But that is my issue

it's in the DNA.

Regards,

Bob

Jun 02, 2013 at 01:57 PM


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