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p.1 #1 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


So these actually required a bit more processing. some I am thinking of backing off on the saturation a little, and may need fine tuning. suggestions appreciated. I will include exif a bit of detail in processing where I can.

1. Another shot of the valley, 1.3 sec, f 16, 17mm, iso 100. i actually applied separate WB to sky and foreground. Pushed shadows a little etc.
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5469/8811001025_f9faef3748_b.jpg

2. this was shot with my 24 tseII lens. finally got to use the tilt shift.
24mm, f10, 2 shot blend, 2.5 stops apart. I hand blended in layer in photoshop. then edited some more by adjusting the usual stuff (shadow, highlights, contrast, etc

http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2893/8821488302_db774507f3_b.jpg

3. similar seen. 2 shot blend, each edited separately and combined. colors are a little off. cant quite figure it out. samyang 14, so dont know f stop.
http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2891/8821323956_fcd77283ac_b.jpg

4. Cool star burst shot. shadows and exposures way pushed. 14mm
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8272/8810616631_348ee95891_b.jpg

I have a couple more, which I will post some time over the weekend with some additional edits.
thanks for looking.


Edited by JimFox on May 25, 2013 at 11:30 AM · View previous versions



May 25, 2013 at 12:16 AM
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p.1 #2 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


Hey Kevin,

You have some nice shots in this series. Gates of the Valley is probably my favorite location in the Valley, you did nice with it. #2 is my favorite, with #3 I think the scene is too yellow, well, or the yellows are too yellow... but the rest of the colors do seem fine, so perhaps add a bit more orange to the yellow?

#1 is a view from Tunnel View. Though I would crop, or use Warp to pull out that bottom right corner, where there is some rocks. And nice work with the sun in #4.

Jim



May 25, 2013 at 02:17 AM
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p.1 #3 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


These are excellent. #2 is my favorite followed by #4. The log in #3 is little distracting to me.
Well done.
Harsha



May 25, 2013 at 06:21 AM
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p.1 #4 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


Overall 3 is my favorite. I don't trust my color judgement but Jim is probably right. But it is my favorite composition and I like it alot. I always prefer having sharp near objects to anchor WA shots. By the way my Samyang while very sharp does produce different colors than my Canon lenses in the same scene and light.


May 25, 2013 at 08:22 AM
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p.1 #5 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


Kevin - Nice series! It's fun looking at your takes since I was just there a week ago and posted here as well. #2 is my favorite and I agree with Jim on #3. Perhaps some slight localized WB adjustment will tone down the yellow tint.


May 25, 2013 at 08:29 AM
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p.1 #6 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


I like 2 & 3. On my monitor, in image 3, I see a hint of green on the sunlit granite. You might try moving the tint slider toward magenta slightly. Thanks for posting.

-Steve



May 25, 2013 at 10:29 AM
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p.1 #7 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


I wouldn't decrease the sat.
nice job!



May 25, 2013 at 08:44 PM
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p.1 #8 · Yosemite some better ones - Part 2


Kevin: Great images! I will be spending 4-5 days in Yosemite with my daughter next week. Although I have been there before, I am not too familiar with the area, as they have been very short day trips. I am particularly interested the location of your #2 and #3 images. Appreciate if you can tell me how do we get there from Yosemite Valley?

Bob: You have some great images from your trip too! Have not seen you around lately in the OM-D image thread. Have you sold your OM-D or something ... and maybe gone to Fuji or Sony? Please feel free to chip-in with any advise, tips and mention of your favorite Yosemite spots.

What are the best locations for sunrise and sunset images?

Cheers,
Bobby



Jun 01, 2013 at 06:53 PM





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