Archive 2013 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

This slipped by, posted elsewhere. Anyway, I keep struggling to find something here, maybe I'm too close to the question.

Thank you for looking,

Bob

Reworked, cropped, etc...

Edited on May 18, 2013 at 05:46 PM · View previous versions

May 17, 2013 at 08:01 PM

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p.1 #2 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

2 definitely. The textures and tonalities are much more appreciable in monochrome, where the color version doesn't do much. For me at least. I like the BW.

Fred

May 17, 2013 at 08:48 PM

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p.1 #3 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

Definitely #1 for me. I really like the processing. Overall I think this is a cool image. I might try some slightly different crops to get the bug a bit more out of center but even that is not a big issue.

May 17, 2013 at 09:08 PM

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p.1 #4 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

A bit busy for me ... leaning B&W like Fred, decenter bug like Jim, maybe some selective blur/defocus to deal "unbusy" it a bit.

May 17, 2013 at 09:27 PM

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #5 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

Must agree with everyone - I like the color as is, BW needs work - re-orientation - good chore for a rainy day.

Thanks guys,

Bob

May 18, 2013 at 09:42 AM


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