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Archive 2013 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work


This slipped by, posted elsewhere. Anyway, I keep struggling to find something here, maybe I'm too close to the question.

Thank you for looking,

Bob
















Reworked, cropped, etc...



Edited on May 18, 2013 at 05:46 PM · View previous versions



May 17, 2013 at 08:01 PM
FredVf
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p.1 #2 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work


2 definitely. The textures and tonalities are much more appreciable in monochrome, where the color version doesn't do much. For me at least. I like the BW.

Fred



May 17, 2013 at 08:48 PM
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p.1 #3 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work


Definitely #1 for me. I really like the processing. Overall I think this is a cool image. I might try some slightly different crops to get the bug a bit more out of center but even that is not a big issue.


May 17, 2013 at 09:08 PM
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p.1 #4 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work


A bit busy for me ... leaning B&W like Fred, decenter bug like Jim, maybe some selective blur/defocus to deal "unbusy" it a bit.


May 17, 2013 at 09:27 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #5 · Your preference? If any? + Re-work


Must agree with everyone - I like the color as is, BW needs work - re-orientation - good chore for a rainy day.

Thanks guys,

Bob



May 18, 2013 at 09:42 AM





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