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Archive 2013 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


Thoughts? Playing with Adobe Paper Texture package....

Regards,

Bob


And the obligatory 'pier shot'...











Edited on Apr 06, 2013 at 09:38 AM · View previous versions



Apr 05, 2013 at 07:01 PM
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p.1 #2 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


I like the obligatory pier shot. Near Savannah?
The texture doesnt do it for me. Maybe on a different subject, dialed down.
Scott



Apr 05, 2013 at 09:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


sbeme wrote:
I like the obligatory pier shot. Near Savannah?
The texture doesnt do it for me. Maybe on a different subject, dialed down.
Scott



Tybee, low tide. Missed sunrise

Bob



Apr 06, 2013 at 05:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


thought so
been there
done that, but not so well

Scott



Apr 06, 2013 at 07:34 AM
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p.1 #5 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


+1 @ Scott

The texture kinda conflicts with the natural textures (brick/wood/siding) of the subject matter. Maybe better served for a different subject. I typically think textures either as a means for hiding things (banding, CA, blotchiness, etc.) that I can't otherwise fix well. That, or to add interest to with expansive uninteresting areas. This one has plenty of natural texture & interest in it, the texture (while some may find artisticly creative), imo steals from it rather than enhance it. Curious to see the pier shot with the texture applied for comparison.

Diggin' the pier lines. Nice crop into the low corners.

With my usual "blue snow" bent, the sand shadows left of the pier are showing a bit cool. I might prefer a more neutral WB for the shadows, which would of course warm the morning sidelighting in the process (change the mood/vibe) and then maybe mask the sky/water (protecting from WB changes) to retain them more cool (or WB of choice).



Apr 06, 2013 at 08:06 AM
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p.1 #6 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


RustyBug wrote:
+1 @ Scott

The texture kinda conflicts with the natural textures (brick/wood/siding) of the subject matter. Maybe better served for a different subject. I typically think textures either as a means for hiding things (banding, CA, blotchiness, etc.) that I can't otherwise fix well. That, or to add interest to with expansive uninteresting areas. This one has plenty of natural texture & interest in it, the texture (while some may find artisticly creative), imo steals from it rather than enhance it. Curious to see the pier shot with the texture applied for comparison.

Diggin' the pier lines. Nice crop into the low
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Taking care of the color balance issues - thoughts on this verison?

Bob








Apr 06, 2013 at 09:37 AM
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p.1 #7 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


Like the first pier shot. Love the second.


Apr 06, 2013 at 03:09 PM
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p.1 #8 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


BW conversion looks good.
Maybe a bit (over)sharpened?
I prefer the color.

Scott



Apr 06, 2013 at 03:49 PM
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p.1 #9 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


nolaguy wrote:
Like the first pier shot. Love the second.



Thanks for your thoughts, glad you enjoy them.

My preferences are often more toward BW or variations there from. In this case, I cannot decide; both the color and BW appeal but in differing ways. Guess 1 of each will cover that

Regards,

Bob



Apr 06, 2013 at 06:58 PM
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p.1 #10 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


sbeme wrote:
BW conversion looks good.
Maybe a bit (over)sharpened?
I prefer the color.

Scott


Thanks Scott,

Appreciate your thoughts - somehow the BW has a greater sense of presence to me, but I remain conflicted (see above).

Regards,

Bob



Apr 06, 2013 at 07:00 PM
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p.1 #11 · Change of pace...Closed for the season plus rework


sbeme wrote:
BW conversion looks good.
Maybe a bit (over)sharpened?
I prefer the color.

Scott


+1
Here's a stab (rough) at what I was thinking.







Apr 06, 2013 at 11:15 PM





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