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Archive 2013 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


Thoughts? Something off the beaten path....

Regards

Bob

Another but not so dark....











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Apr 04, 2013 at 06:23 PM
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p.1 #2 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


cute
like the conversion
dont like the light fall off LLC, top of head L side more than R, index finger.
The shot has enough merits on sheer cuteness and special moments. Unless there is some other significance, I would fix the dark finger.

Scott



Apr 04, 2013 at 06:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


I like this captured moment a lot!

Nits: Lightening the finger would be a small but real benefit. I'm am curious why the finger seems to have an echo?







Apr 04, 2013 at 11:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


sbeme wrote:
cute
like the conversion
dont like the light fall off LLC, top of head L side more than R, index finger.
The shot has enough merits on sheer cuteness and special moments. Unless there is some other significance, I would fix the dark finger.

Scott



Thanks Scott,

Yes, finger needs work and need to better contain my 'vignette' gene.

Appreciate your comments,

Bob



Apr 05, 2013 at 08:48 AM
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p.1 #5 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


AuntiPode wrote:
I like this captured moment a lot!

Nits: Lightening the finger would be a small but real benefit. I'm am curious why the finger seems to have an echo?



AuntiPode,

Thanks, glad you like it.

Hmm, now that is strange. My guess - I was using the clone brush in LR at the end and think it might be an artifact of that. I should have returned to CS6 and done it properly from there. Good eye!

Ragards,

Bob



Apr 05, 2013 at 08:53 AM
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p.1 #6 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


Nice combination of good eye contact and peak action ... diggin' the chin and lower lip.


Apr 05, 2013 at 11:53 AM
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p.1 #7 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


RustyBug wrote:
Nice combination of good eye contact and peak action ... diggin' the chin and lower lip.


Thanks Kent,

Might be some level of exaggerated theatrics added to the mix on her part also.

Bob



Apr 05, 2013 at 01:28 PM
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p.1 #8 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


Bob Jarman wrote
Might be some level of exaggerated theatrics added to the mix on her part also.


Yup ... peak action.



Apr 05, 2013 at 01:39 PM
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p.1 #9 · At lunch - yogurt time. Plus Hi-key REwork


Hi-key version posted above - think I prefer it. <edit> more I look, no doubt, #2

I was wrong about the finger - seems to be light bleeding over the edge - cloned it whole once more.

Bob



Apr 05, 2013 at 06:51 PM





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