Nice set but for #4, which doesn't look sharp. I like #1 best, but suggest you think about a different crop. Since you've cut off two feet and an arm, consider a tighter crop, from right about at the knees and up. This would result in a horizontal crop, which would be in keeping with the direction of movement in the photo--might or might not be to your liking.
Yeah I'm curious if this was strobed too... If not, I want to move to this high school. The other night I was shooting at 128,000 ISO, f/2.8, and 1/320 haha.
Yes these were shot with two speedlites in each corner. I had them set two 1/2 power at 70mm zoom and pointed towards the top of the key. They were also slightly feathered up.
Russ, thanks for the comments. Cropping is something I need to focus harder on doing correctly.
Thanks Chris. I would love to put up some strobes but I like the quick set up and take down. Super clamp to the railing, attach the bracket and triggers, then I'm good to go.