At least you found a spot that had the wire accent to break up the brick wall. Makes a big difference and gives her a frame to fit in.Helps focus attention away from the brick pattern back to the model. Nice image.
Yeah, not sure what you mean about the brick wall. I shoot against brick walls whenever I find them, clients like 'em. However, unlike Jefferies, I don't like that you put her in that spot with the wire accent as it pulls attention away from your subject. That's one of the beauties of shoot a subject against a brick wall is that there is really nothing to pull the attention away from the subject.
You've captured a nice expression here, looks good. Nice job!
I think if you had put more brick in front of her instead of behind her my eye would be more drawn to her. I keep looking right to see if I can see more down the wall. Make sense?
I don't think you should finish it at the bottom by cropping through a button or a pocket flap or even the half cuff of her right arm.
Another minor thought - if her left arm were posed more forward, you'd likely crop more off the right side. Then you'd compose with her off center a tad more.
