Rick,
I like this but a few things going against it...the light on her face is making her nose look funny. Maybe it's the laptop I'm on now but she looks a little over exposed and the bright part of the dress and background are distracting.
Nice concept. The shadow on her nose gives her entire face an "off" feeling. Additionally, I'm not a huge fan of textures, but that's more taste than anything else.
The hair/side light is spilling onto her nose. Left side of her lower body is blown out. Writing is almost always distracting, particularly when on a dress.
Doesn't really work for me. The image is really somewhat OOF, perspective problems leading to facial issues, and the shot can generally be described a cluttered, way to busy and the colors are off and don't mesh up well.
