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Michaelparris
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Thanks for looking comments welcome....They dared the brother in the last shot

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Jan 06, 2013 at 05:01 PM

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p.1 #2 · more siblings....

I like the processing in #1

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Jan 06, 2013 at 05:11 PM

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p.1 #3 · more siblings....

nice reflections in #2

Jan 06, 2013 at 06:10 PM

Andre Labonte
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Nice set.

The 1st one superb ... a truely great shot.

I like the creativity of the 2nd.

The 3rd has perfect composition but it feels like it has too much contrast.

The forth shot is just fun & funny ... being from a large family and having lots of kids of my own (one with six pack like that) I appreciate this shot

Jan 06, 2013 at 07:26 PM

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Thanks guys.....

Andre, thanks for the critiques. I completely agree with you on number 3. I am going to go fiddle with that file and address the problem.

Thanks again

Jan 06, 2013 at 11:05 PM

Andre Labonte
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Michaelparris wrote:
Thanks guys.....

Andre, thanks for the critiques. I completely agree with you on number 3. I am going to go fiddle with that file and address the problem.

Thanks again

You're welcome. Please post the reworked #3.

Jan 06, 2013 at 11:36 PM

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#3 - Crop some of the bright white at the bottom to avoid it becoming a distraction.

Try it on your computer screen by scrolling the pic until the white is hidden or partially hidden.

Jan 07, 2013 at 01:01 AM

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p.1 #8 · more siblings....

Jim Rickards wrote:
#3 - Crop some of the bright white at the bottom to avoid it becoming a distraction.

Try it on your computer screen by scrolling the pic until the white is hidden or partially hidden.

Good call...thanks!

Jan 07, 2013 at 01:30 AM


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