jprezant wrote:
nice man. im on my laptop which displays colder than normal, but it still feels kind of cold, when i feel like this
image should exude warmth.
+1. It still works though but I would warm it up some.
jprezant wrote:
nice man. im on my laptop which displays colder than normal, but it still feels kind of cold, when i feel like this
image should exude warmth.
Compelling image. In addition to the recommendations about warmth, I would suggest trying a 10x8 crop to eliminate a good portion of the background in front of her. Normally, I would like to see some "gaze-into" space in front of the subject but in this case:
- she's not really gazing
- the important relationship here is her being "energized" by the sun
- that crop would put her head in the ROT spot and I think would inject a little more balance. I'm not a slave to ROT but in this case balance/energy/harmony seem to be a good mix.
Just a suggestion.
I love the composition and its taken really well but I think the picture should have been color corrected to look warm. It has colder colors and that doesn't go well with the sunlight
Agree to have like it a bit warmer 