FYI -- the people forum, due to the high number of people whom post here, has a rule that you can generate one new thread a day on the forum. You generated two, this being your second.
As for this picture, composition is OK, but exposure is a tad too high for her very white skin ... it gives her face a flat look. Also, it's not a flattering bikini top or pose.
oh no you created two threads you should be ashamed.
I would say the exposure isnt high because everything other than her skin seems to be in good exposure. what is a bit off is the dark area under her eyes give a touch of a black eye look. You say you took some more are they all tight shots?