Nice start with this one. Strong colours and an interesting expression.
A minor nit - the chin shadow is quite pronounced.
One of the rules on the forum is - one post per day. Don't worry, you are far from being the first to miss that rule. It's posted on the top left of this page. I wouldn't worry about it this time, just note it for next time. You can, however, post several photos in one post if you care to next time.
^Douglas said it. IMHO it would be slightly better without the +0.3 EV compensation. Great model, eyes, hair, colours, etc. If you want some nitpicking, I would remove the leather element below her right elbow, for some reason my eyes go there (maybe because it is darker than most of the other tones in the photo). Just my 0.02, good job.
