I’ve always found it difficult to place a model’s hands. Her left sleeve looks almost too long and limbless with no hand showing. And her right hand looks purposeless to the stance with the thumb cut off. The lighting is well done save for the grey background bubbles, which are either flair or miscued clone stamps to emulate flair. Just my two cents worth.
What is the point / objective that you are trying to achieve?
I ask this because of the lighting on her face / angle relative to her nose / far eye ... as well as the pose / look on her face. That and the way that the garment lays / is lit.
Neither seem to be very flattering ... which might be okay for some "unconventional" pose / lighting to go for a "different look" ... BUT ... for a FASHION shot, the garment is showing rather badly and wrinkles, gaps, tugs, pulls and where the highlights/shadows fall.
A fashion shot shouldn't show the garment so poorly, imo.
