Works for me. I think the ones where the red color is not that pronounced are better. I like the 2nd one the best I'd also like to see some variety in her facial expressions.
It's a gorgeous model and a cool location but I'm not clear on how they go together.
Is she a jealous girlfriend who wrecks her boyfriend's office upon finding out he's married? Did she just wreck a job interviewer's office having wild and crazy sex with him to guarantee herself a job?
Pretty cool, I think the processing takes away some of the distraction of the surroundings. She has a great stare. Consider varying the processing slightly, perhaps the color of the highlight, for instance, so that we don't tire of seeing it used in one set.
. I think once in a while is ok. It also depend what you are trying to do.