I like the idea and the comp, but looks a lot more like a bike path than someplace you'd get a bus. Also a lot of haloing around the mortarboard.
Best,
Dave
penpro wrote:
I really like it and I like the fact that it is a small path and not a typical road. The halos are the biggest issue that I saw right away.
DTOB wrote:
Now that you've fixed the most aggregious one (around the hat) it is far less obvious, but the bench and the subject are still glowing.
I have to say, I really do like the composition. I like how she is framed perfectly in the hill.
Fixed it a bit more...I will come clean it is a composite. We really liked the lighting on surroundings but the composition of her in another shot.....just me being sloppy in post. We took shots at 2 different times of day.
I would have never pegged it as a composite, so very well done there. I would be curious to see the 2 shots that went into it.
The only thing left that stands out to me now is the patch of green grass beneath her. The rest of the frame is very subdued (which I like), that patch of colour grabs my eye.
*edit*
Maybe a *slight* tilt to my left. Just to level her thighs a bit (but I wouldn't go completely level).
DTOB wrote:
I would have never pegged it as a composite, so very well done there. I would be curious to see the 2 shots that went into it.
The only thing left that stands out to me now is the patch of green grass beneath her. The rest of the frame is very subdued (which I like), that patch of colour grabs my eye.
*edit*
Maybe a *slight* tilt to my left. Just to level her thighs a bit (but I wouldn't go completely level).
Thanks..If I had to guess I bet there are a lot of dogs being walked on this path and that area next to the bench is a favorite spot for them to "do there business".....Lots of nitrogen in there urine keeps the grass green year round
