I shot Kerry's Senior portraits yesterday and actually haven't had time to process any but this one but wanted to share. This young lady was extremely nervous for the first 15 minutes then she got use to the lens and transformed into one of the most natural seniors I have shot. She was so much fun to photograph! Thanks for looking, I'll post more of her latter.
I can't tell if you did smoothing on the hand or not, but something seems odd to me about it, but I like the rest of it. Nice lighting and pose. I'd almost want to see the frame brought down a little lower though so that her head was closer to the top. It might just be that your logo is obscuring the part of her torso that is showing, but just a thought.
I like the soft wrap of light around the hat. Great!
Cute young lady, don't mind the one eye at all and it works with the hat.
I'd prefer a side view rather than the back of the hand, it just looks too big. With her wearing the hat, her face looks smaller since you can't see the top of her head. Reminds me of a Seinfeld episode, "man hands".
she is very photogenic and did great capturing it in this shot.