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Archive 2012 · My Daughter again

  
 
kwhitt
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p.1 #1 · My Daughter again


We started her Senior pictures, I have to do it in spells because she is just so busy. This was our first out.

1 .http://k-cphotography.smugmug.com/Other/Brittanys-Senior-Pictures/i-wgtWJNF/0/L/_FAB9379_1-L.jpg

2 .http://k-cphotography.smugmug.com/Other/Brittanys-Senior-Pictures/i-TL56vgs/0/L/_FAB9401_1-L.jpg

3 .http://k-cphotography.smugmug.com/Other/Brittanys-Senior-Pictures/i-mtL4vLd/0/L/_FAB9385_1-L.jpg

C&C welcome.



Nov 11, 2012 at 11:14 AM
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p.1 #2 · My Daughter again


Howdy,

First...my standard intro to anyone "new" to me on this forum...
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.

Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. I can only speak for myself and what I do or do not find appealing in the posted photos. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
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Some Quick Comments:

Image 1
I don't like the composition.

Image 2
I don't like the pose, the expression, the POV.

Image 3
I don't like the pose, the expression, the weeds in front.

I hope these comments help you.



Nov 11, 2012 at 08:39 PM
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p.1 #3 · My Daughter again


Love the colors in this set =)


Nov 13, 2012 at 02:17 PM





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