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Oct 15, 2012 at 12:16 PM

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p.1 #2 · Slow Path

Joe, I like the comp, shadows and lines but it's far too red for me.
Maybe desaturate a lot?
Chris

Oct 15, 2012 at 03:37 PM

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p.1 #3 · Slow Path

you mean like this? the 'red' is actually a chocolate brown gradient applied then 'tweaked'

Joe

Oct 15, 2012 at 04:16 PM

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p.1 #4 · Slow Path

Joe, I had something like this in my mind.
Chris
http://christiandaescher.zenfolio.com/img/s1/v57/p1196149320-4.jpg

Oct 15, 2012 at 05:09 PM

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p.1 #5 · Slow Path

Thanks Chris, your is a good interpretation but I like the vibrancy in my rendition more. But thanks for sharing. It is also interesting that this is still a black and white image but tweaked, gees!

Joe

Oct 15, 2012 at 09:40 PM

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p.1 #6 · Slow Path

How about this rendition, your toning with a bump in contrast and boosting the yellow lines?

Oct 15, 2012 at 09:49 PM

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p.1 #7 · Slow Path

it makes the first one look like its over saturated....

Oct 15, 2012 at 09:50 PM

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p.1 #8 · Slow Path

Joe, I like the last version best. Time to move on.

Chris

Oct 16, 2012 at 03:50 PM


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