Wow, this is some ridiculously awesome coverage. The IR stuff kinda freaks me out (in general, not just here) but there are some amazing captures here.
On the CC side (not sure if you were looking for CC) I don't like how you often shoot at an angle personally. It doesn't add to the shot. For example 63,64 amongst others.
Also your pj work is a lot stronger than the few portraits you took. The portraits are the weakest area of your work.
But having said that this is an amazing set to say the least
For Tobiah: Thank you for your CC ... perhaps we have explained bad ... this job is all about PJ, no posing, no direction from us ... the moments we have captured are real moments without our intervention.
We realize that some photos of the couple are weak compared to the work, but that weakness is enhanced (in our opinion) from the reality of the moments taken.
We hope to have explained…. We scheduled an English course
In any case, we will try to improve more, especially from the point of view of the poses... where you are 10 years ahead
This is absolutely exceptional documentary work. Some of the best I've ever seen on the board. The processing is flawless (although I don't feel the IR images match the style of the rest of the work and do not add to the overall storytelling). Wide angle distortion detracts from a few of the images. Beautiful and effective compositions. Wonderful sense of the moment. The set is brilliant from start to finish. Six, 12, 20, 30, 31, 51, 52, 55, 62, 63, 70, and 77 are my favorites. As Mario said earlier, if I were looking for a wedding photographer you would be at the top of the list. Bravo.
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Thanks to all of the comments, really.
For Tobiah: Thank you for your CC ... perhaps we have explained bad ... this job is all about PJ, no posing, no direction from us ... the moments we have captured are real moments without our intervention.
We realize that some photos of the couple are weak compared to the work, but that weakness is enhanced (in our opinion) from the reality of the moments taken.
We hope to have explained…. We scheduled an English course
In any case, we will try to improve more, especially from the point of view of the poses... where you are 10 years ahead...Show more →
I completely understand. I really like your work and the natural moments are great.
I just feel like 72-75 aren't natural PJ moments. They are staged (however slightly) I doubt they held their heads in that position that many times as they were walking through a field? If you are going to give some direction for those shots - like go stand in the field with your heads together and have fun, give enough direction for the shots to be a little stronger..
I don't mean to be harsh as your work is brilliant, but just some CC to make is that much better all imho of course!
Man you did an awesome job, ........ they are going to be blown away with the energy & emotion you captured
The Delorean is a priceless moment ...... I think sometimes the planets line up & you get to shoot a wedding where the location, atmosphere, emotion & people all come together to make it photography heaven
Thanks for sharing ....keep rocking
Michael Valeri
