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p.1 #1 · Fire Thrower

Hi all,

Took this at a festival at the weekend. Think I'm reasonably happy with it, but curious to gather some critque to improve it further.

Comments welcome!

Ben

Edited on Aug 20, 2012 at 02:58 PM · View previous versions

Aug 20, 2012 at 02:18 PM

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p.1 #2 · Fire Thrower

Looks ok to me, maybe you could take some off the bottom?

Aug 20, 2012 at 02:36 PM

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p.1 #3 · Fire Thrower

Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:

Aug 20, 2012 at 03:15 PM

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p.1 #4 · Fire Thrower

As Karen wrote "Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:", then illustrated.

Scott

Aug 20, 2012 at 06:29 PM

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p.1 #5 · Fire Thrower

sbeme wrote:
As Karen wrote "Consider tightening the composition and opening the shadows a bit:", then illustrated.

Scott

++2 I would consider brightening the man up even more...

Aug 20, 2012 at 08:07 PM

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p.1 #6 · Fire Thrower

Cheers all - agreed.
Certainly worth bringing the shadows up a touch.

Aug 21, 2012 at 06:44 AM

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p.1 #7 · Fire Thrower

Perhaps a touch of noise-reduction..?

Aug 22, 2012 at 08:43 AM

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p.1 #8 · Fire Thrower

Looks like the noise has ramped up in the Jpeg conversion, there is a touch in the original raw, but yes - the jpeg above looks pretty noisy!

Aug 28, 2012 at 11:36 AM


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