Excellent image and well seen. Hope you don't mind a small nit Greg - I would crop about half off the OOF foreground. Personally I find it distracting. But as is it is a beautiful artistic image with wonderful textures and colour.
angel manguel wrote:
Excellent image and well seen. Hope you don't mind a small nit Greg - I would crop about half off the OOF foreground. Personally I find it distracting. But as is it is a beautiful artistic image with wonderful textures and colour.
Alan
Thanks Alan. I'll crop it when I get home tonight and see how it looks but I think you are right! I appreciate the input!
What THEY said! LOVELY shot, beautiful textures, just crop that darker part of the foreground and you've got a real winner! Really loving those textures on the wall!
Thanks for the wonderful comments! I really appreciate it!
As for the color of the concrete...sadly, the discoloration is the result of a fire in that area in 1985. A reflux line opened up and sprayed 700º Naphtha, which in turn ignited instantly and the temperature rose to a couple thousand degrees. All around that area, the concrete is discolored and pitted. It serves as a reminder for those of us that work with it....that said, the color was slightly exaggerated in post processing...
Here is a reworked version with the crop suggested....
Really cool on the color contrast here Greg, love the patina of the concrete and its coloring.
My thought, in first image was that there looks to be a lot of fine sharpening showing in the foreground, I would just put a softer blur on it and darken it a bit more. I think the image looks a tad to light overall also, darker-richer