Nice set ... some goodness in here.
cool location.
couple thoughts:
-the set would be stronger without #4.
-I like 8 - a lot but his left hand looks forced forced. Like "place your hand on her hip."
-#9 is he wearing a bright green (neon) t-shirt or sport shirt?
3 was cute. 6 she looks like an elephant. Terrible silo. Look again. You'll never be able to unsee it.
Processing is good. His outfit was blah. You shoulda couched here. Like your watermark.
Yeah, I agree about the hand on #8. It was the best I had from that location and I'm not liking his hand placement either (I should have caught this).
He's wearing a button down shirt but he's directly next to some plants (his shift was kind of shiny/reflective) but I should color correct that.
Biggest challenge here was isolating them from the crowd of BBQ'ers on a nice sunny day at a picnic area.
I think you did fine with isolating them away from the crowd. But, with crowds, if done right you could have made some really sweet scenes with the couple and the crowd.
Sam Hassas wrote:
3 was cute. 6 she looks like an elephant. Terrible silo. Look again. You'll never be able to unsee it.
Processing is good. His outfit was blah. You shoulda couched here. Like your watermark.
Thanks for pointing this out. Totes missed it!
Will definitely coach with attire next time. I told them 'smart casual' but I should've some asterisks in there.
I snorted and had to show my wife. Besides that, though, I was really fond of some of the angles you captured, such as those in 2a, 3, 7, and 8. Also loved your B/W in 7.
