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Archive 2012 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Working on some more black and whites, this is from Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona from almost 3 years ago.
cheers Andrew




Feb 11, 2012 at 10:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


An inviting perspective with clearly delimitated planes and some strong lines. I would just open the shadows just a tad in the darker areas (the two slopes in the FG at least, possibly also the cliff in the BG).

santiago



Feb 12, 2012 at 05:54 AM
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p.1 #3 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


This had to be a challenging capture and for processing.
Great comp with excellent layering of light and tones and a neat zig-zag progression through the image (which, for me starts at the top, although the water would more usually pull my eye deeper from the bottom.
I think Santiago's suggestion is worth experimenting with. But it is also fine as is.
Scott



Feb 12, 2012 at 08:30 AM
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p.1 #4 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Nice imaging, Andrew. Personally, I'm OK with the shadows as is. There are plenty of tonalities in this image and some need to be dark.


Feb 12, 2012 at 01:21 PM
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p.1 #5 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


I'm not an expert, but I find the composition excellent and the tones well balanced given the difficulty of capturing two differently lit scenes. I can see the bright background, then look down and follow the river in the darker area. Nice image.

I'd still follow the advice of people with more technical vocabulary though



Feb 12, 2012 at 02:36 PM
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p.1 #6 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Andrew I think this has a very good tonal range, there is no lost detail anywhere on my monitor.
A great image as well

Cheers Ray



Feb 13, 2012 at 04:06 AM
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p.1 #7 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Looks good to me and a nice catch !


Feb 15, 2012 at 11:50 AM
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p.1 #8 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Nice depiction of the area. Must be a bit downstream of the actual launch area. I really like the comp, and think the shadows could go either way. Still detail in them.


Feb 17, 2012 at 05:37 PM
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p.1 #9 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


I like the mix of tones. There are many ways to process, your's is quite nice!


Feb 18, 2012 at 05:07 PM
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p.1 #10 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Such a beautiful, rugged landscape very well presented


Feb 18, 2012 at 05:40 PM
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p.1 #11 · Lee's Ferry, Colorado River, Arizona


Thanx for the feedback....I'm still just getting into BW so I do appreciate all the comments
cheers Andrew



Feb 18, 2012 at 05:44 PM





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