3, 6, 7, 8, 13, 18, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28 and some in the reception too.
pretty good on keeping the WB consistant. exposures seem good.
but then i see some that need working on either post processing / composition / or timing.
meaning you have some okay images but they do not grab me with either the 3 above.
Composition wise : ... you played it safe ... everything is in the center.
some examples:
24, 25, 26, 27, 28: while nice ... what can we do take them up a notch? the images almost feel flat to me. plus all the same camera height.
#5 Girls love shoes ... make them rock. Love the idea ... but i find the shoes get lost in with the background.
#21 .... i look at the background/ elbow first before i even swing over to the rest of the groom.
#22: cool shot ... go back and kill the background. plus the white-gringo guy off to the left is grabbing some of the attention. also get rid of the fire alarm system (red boxes) in the background.
#32 .... i don't look at the guys ... well i am a guy ... but my eyes actually want to look all the way across the floor to the back ground.
I think the idea is cool but a combination of huge f-stop ... and slow shutter speed to bring in ambient.
a good start ... but areas for improvement to take it to the next level.
3, 6, 7, 8, 13, 18, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28 and some in the reception too.
pretty good on keeping the WB consistant. exposures seem good.
but then i see some that need working on either post processing / composition / or timing.
meaning you have some okay images but they do not grab me with either the 3 above.
Composition wise : ... you played it safe ... everything is in the center.
some examples:
24, 25, 26, 27, 28: while nice ... what can we do take them up a notch? the images almost feel flat to me. plus all the same camera height.
#5 Girls love shoes ... make them rock. Love the idea ... but i find the shoes get lost in with the background.
#21 .... i look at the background/ elbow first before i even swing over to the rest of the groom.
#22: cool shot ... go back and kill the background. plus the white-gringo guy off to the left is grabbing some of the attention. also get rid of the fire alarm system (red boxes) in the background.
#32 .... i don't look at the guys ... well i am a guy ... but my eyes actually want to look all the way across the floor to the back ground.
I think the idea is cool but a combination of huge f-stop ... and slow shutter speed to bring in ambient.
a good start ... but areas for improvement to take it to the next level.
Many smiles captured. I'm sure the couple and family will be happy with the images.
I'd love to see you try using a shallower depth of field at times. There are images where your small aperture brings in many distractions from the background.
Perhaps you can use less flash during the reception to kill more ambient as well.
