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willw9
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p.1 #1 · Tanzanian Safari


Hey all,

Here's three pictures I took from a safari in Tanzania. The first two are from Lake Manyara National Park, and the third is from Serengeti National Park. Again, I'm trying to improve my post skills, so kindly direct comments in that direction if possible!




Feb 09, 2012 at 02:51 AM
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p.1 #2 · Tanzanian Safari


Great shots!! I am going on a safari in May and I wanted to know if it was going to be as great a trip as I think. My expectations are high.


Feb 09, 2012 at 11:46 PM
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p.1 #3 · Tanzanian Safari


Hey Will,

That would be a great place to go! I like your shots but I have a couple of thoughts for you.

#1, the road along the left edge, not sure I like that. I think if you stepped across the road to the left shot and shot with the road going through the scene instead of along an edge would work better. #2, the mountains and clouds are very cyan tinted, a layer mask in that area to remove some of the cyan cast would be good. #3, sometimes its hard to avoid having the horizon in the center, but that's something to consider. The other thing I see is in the lower left a brighter branch sticks out against the darker trees, I would clone that out. Both #1 and 3 seem to be a little unlevel too.

Jim



Feb 10, 2012 at 01:55 PM
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p.1 #4 · Tanzanian Safari


Great thoughts Jim--much appreciated. How do I use a layer mask to remove, explicitly, the cyan tint?


Feb 10, 2012 at 09:17 PM
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p.1 #5 · Tanzanian Safari


i really like the last one. On the edge of a great vast space. very nice.


Feb 10, 2012 at 09:23 PM





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