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Archive 2012 · A Couple of my daughter.

  
 
mweddle
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p.1 #1 · A Couple of my daughter.


Hello all! I don't post here very often, but I am really trying to improve on my skills and, judging from the work here, I have come to the right place. I would really love some honest feedback on where I'm at as far as people photograpy. Here are a couple of my favorite "model". Thanks for looking!

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Untitled by mweddle, on Flickr

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Untitled by mweddle, on Flickr



Feb 07, 2012 at 10:24 PM
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These are very nice! I like how you had the colorful background in No. 1, and used your bokeh to separate it from your "model". No 2, really nice use of light. I would have preferred not to have the left shoe cut off, but that's a minor nit. Overall, these are just solid and I'm looking forward to you posting a lot now!
Ron



Feb 07, 2012 at 10:27 PM
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p.1 #3 · A Couple of my daughter.


Beautiful daughter you got there. Everything looks good to me, but I have to agree with Ron about the left foot as well.


Feb 07, 2012 at 10:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · A Couple of my daughter.


Thanks guys! This was kind of a test shoot for a new, to me, 5d that my friend loaned to me which just happend to be about the time my wife finished my daughters new dress for the daddy-daughter dance coming up in a few days. I will definitely post more here. I've just been intimated by the level of work here and have mainly used it for inspiration up to this point.


Feb 07, 2012 at 10:38 PM
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p.1 #5 · A Couple of my daughter.


Good critiques already. I'll add that a variety of expressions is a good thing. Don't let her use that same one every time.



Feb 08, 2012 at 08:20 AM





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