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p.1 #1 · Cameo (C&C welcome)

I like this, but it's been going over like a lead balloon elsewhere. Comments and criticism welcome.

Feb 05, 2012 at 12:09 PM

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p.1 #2 · Cameo (C&C welcome)

Lighting is nice but the nose is too close to the edge of the face IMO. I think you need to turn her so just the corner of the eye is at the edge.

Feb 05, 2012 at 12:40 PM

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p.1 #3 · Cameo (C&C welcome)

add more negative space camera left. She's jammed into that left side.

Feb 05, 2012 at 01:02 PM

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p.1 #4 · Cameo (C&C welcome)

Pfiltz wrote:
add more negative space camera left. She's jammed into that left side.
Agree.
A little light - a small catchlight in the eye would be nice.

Feb 05, 2012 at 01:15 PM

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p.1 #5 · Cameo (C&C welcome)

I agree with Pfiltz, composition doesn't quite make sense. The dead space behind her does not add to the otherwise mysterious feel. I would like to see it cooler and with less contrast.

Nice work!

-Brian

Feb 05, 2012 at 03:03 PM


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