1 - quite nice of her, apart from her hands, but really dont like the background
2 - nice idea for a pose but her eyes are closed
3 - nice light in her eyes, but she looks like she's pissed at something you just said
4 - eyes closed again
5 - nice light on her face again but she looks like she's bored
6 - great expression, background, pose, tones
7 - great everything, might be worth PS-ing the reflections out of the glass doors and the glass behind her so they dont distract
Saved the best for last didn't you. It's 5,6, & 7 for me. Really like your framing in 5. Nice depth and use of light. In 6 & 7 I liked your use of color to frame your subject. Nice series
7 for me. I would consider cloning out the light next to her right hand, as well as the one lower. Easy fix. Do it in a layer, then turn on and off and see what you think.
