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p.1 #1 · a few at the beach


g'day all

first time poster on the landscape forum...not my usual style but have been trying to get into landscape photography
would love some input on these shots

http://www.studio102.net/uploads/holidays/holidays_359bw.jpg

hdr on this one
http://www.studio102.net/uploads/holidays/holidays_1000And8more_tonemappedborder.jpg

http://www.studio102.net/uploads/holidays/QLD_1635.jpg

http://www.studio102.net/uploads/holidays/QLD_1637And8more_tonemappedbw.jpg



Jan 31, 2012 at 07:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · a few at the beach


Not sure why no one has commented?? But I'll say a few things that hit my mind!
No.1 - would like to understand a bit better what is in your mind when composing this picture, I am assuming this is a needle on the beach? Did you find it there or did you place it? If the latter what are you trying to portray with the children behind?

No. 2 - The sky makes me feel dizzy when looking at this one - does not work for me, the buildings look like they are shaking as a consequence of the sky.

No. 3 - I like this a lot and probably the most out of the set. I think it is the simplicity of the shot along with the more muted colours which I am drawn to.

Finally

No.4 - I like the potential composition of this shot but the post processing is not quite to my taste. To be so dark lends it self to something more sinister in my opinion and I don't think this scape would warrant it.

Please take my thoughts just as they are, one persons opinion, you obviously are very good behind the camera and I look forward to seeing more of you work.



Feb 07, 2012 at 08:45 AM
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p.1 #3 · a few at the beach


#1 I like the most. Not really a landscape but a nice shot.

#2 is too much HDR for me. I like the reflection and the clarity in the water but too surreal for me.

#3 Weighs a lot on the right. The centrally located bird and the people on the right make for an unbalanced photo. And the horizon is crooked.

#4 HDR as well? I'd like to see it again a little less cooked



Feb 07, 2012 at 12:14 PM
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p.1 #4 · a few at the beach


I think #1 is very powerful and could be some kind of poster for needle exchange or some other anti drug message.

Jeanette



Feb 12, 2012 at 05:35 PM





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