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Archive 2012 · Red in NYC - again

  
 
Bob Rossi
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p.1 #1 · Red in NYC - again


C & C


Jan 21, 2012 at 09:02 AM
Bernie
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p.1 #2 · Red in NYC - again


You chose a great subject.

This is a shot with a lot of potential. It's old. It's weathered. We could be looking at the textures it has to offer up close. The short DOF is also blurring that potential on the short end. Bring out the textures.

The shadows are also interfering with the checkerboard pattern. It would have worked better all in shadow or all in sun, or at least smoother transition between the two.



Jan 21, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Bob Rossi
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p.1 #3 · Red in NYC - again


Looking again I see the foreground is blurred (not desirable I think as this is causing a distraction) and is also where the shadows are. Maybe re-cropping or looking at other frames of the same subject I can sharpen the focal point of the photo


Jan 21, 2012 at 10:30 AM
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p.1 #4 · Red in NYC - again


You know, with abstract stuff like that, I like to turn things around....lets say 90 degrees or even 180.
Give it a try.

JP



Jan 21, 2012 at 11:24 AM
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p.1 #5 · Red in NYC - again


I will play around with that idea thanks.


Jan 22, 2012 at 12:13 PM





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