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Archive 2011 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts


Appreciate C&C - images from a brief trip to Savannah.

Not sure about the Alley image.


Thanks for looking and offering your thoughts,

Bob



Oct 16, 2011 at 08:28 AM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #2 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts


Well Bob, here is what I think:

#1. Edges left to right are busy and the rest of it with more busy shapes and lines and that pink color not very pleasing and probably just because of color a candidate for b&w.

#2 & #4. It is the kind of imagery a newbie would take. Details and more details. I say let your imagination take the best of you.

#3. The best composition here. One suggestion - avoid the processing you just gave to it. In my opinion cheapens the image.



Oct 16, 2011 at 11:44 AM
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p.1 #3 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts


Kaden K. wrote:
Well Bob, here is what I think:

#1. Edges left to right are busy and the rest of it with more busy shapes and lines and that pink color not very pleasing and probably just because of color a candidate for b&w.

#2 & #4. It is the kind of imagery a newbie would take. Details and more details. I say let your imagination take the best of you.

#3. The best composition here. One suggestion - avoid the processing you just gave to it. In my opinion cheapens the image.


Kaden,

Thanks for your thoughts...

Have not looked a #1 as BW, shall do that, although, fwiw the pink and blue are close to the actual color (not my cup of tea for sure).

#2 & 4 - fair enough.

#3, my favorite although I've not had time to mull over possibilities. I'm not comfortable with the perspective.

thanks again,

Bob



Oct 16, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts


Nothing wrong with the perspective in #3. The processing however has that painterly feeling that lost the novelty long time ago.


Oct 16, 2011 at 11:56 AM
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p.1 #5 · Four from Saturday for your thoughrts


Kaden K. wrote:
Nothing wrong with the perspective in #3. The processing however has that painterly feeling that lost the novelty long time ago.


Thanks - my obsession with software

Bob



Oct 16, 2011 at 11:58 AM





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