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brockwhittaker
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p.1 #1 · Photo Critique Please?


I have been working harder lately on composing my photos better, and lighting them better. I wouldn't consider myself anything but an amateur. I would appreciate some *constructive* criticism on my photos.

Any help is great help, and I'd appreciate all comments.

Elephant's Eye (Teardrop) -- Taken on a trip to Kerala, India
http://www.flickr.com/photos/brockwhittaker/6225322289/in/photostream

Taken on a beach in Kerala
http://www.flickr.com/photos/brockwhittaker/6226185034/in/photostream

Taken in Nandi Hills, Karnataka, India
http://www.flickr.com/photos/brockwhittaker/6154957479/in/photostream

These are just some photos, feel free to look at others, but again, any criticism would be nice .

Have a nice day.



Oct 10, 2011 at 06:00 AM
PeterToronto
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p.1 #2 · Photo Critique Please?


You'll be more likely to get responses if you post the images directly in this post.

Peace
Peter

www.peteranthonyphotography.com



Oct 10, 2011 at 06:27 AM
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p.1 #3 · Photo Critique Please?


Welcome to FM !!!

As Peter mentioned, it is a bit easier for others if they are directly posted rather than linked.

For me, they look "overcooked". You specifically mention in the coral shot that color & contrast were not adjusted, but I have to wonder if your saturation is up high and or how you might otherwise be processing them to get them 'overcooked'.

I understand that some people like vibrant color, but (imo) they are all overdone, taking away from their other qualities. That being said, "art" is "art", and if that is the look that you are striving for, then that's your call. In that regard, the elephant shot looks more like a painting than a photograph ... kinda diggin' it, but I'm having trouble with it's ultra-heavy handed processing.

Again, welcome to FM.

FM ROCKS !!!



Oct 10, 2011 at 06:55 AM
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p.1 #4 · Photo Critique Please?


Thanks RustyBug.. I think it is my monitor. I looked at them on my friend's Mac, and my photos do look oversaturated. Maybe time for a new(er) monitor.



Oct 10, 2011 at 09:18 AM
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p.1 #5 · Photo Critique Please?


It would also help to see the EXIF data.


Oct 10, 2011 at 04:00 PM





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