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p.1 #1 · Wharfside

three variations
wish I hadnt shot so tight

Scott

Oct 06, 2011 at 12:07 PM

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p.1 #2 · Wharfside

Scott,
Wonderful! I like the 3rd version the best. If the ground were added to that one then it may have a little more balance and I may prefer. I would have to see.

Oct 06, 2011 at 12:42 PM

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p.1 #3 · Wharfside

Sorry Scott, these are a bit of a broken pencil to me.

I see the range of textures, I see the repeating shapes, but I don't see anything that unifies them into a worthwhile picture.

I would like a story and these feel more like just backgrounds, empty stages waiting for the actors.

Paul Silver

Oct 06, 2011 at 01:32 PM

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p.1 #4 · Wharfside

Scott,
Yes, I think more on the left would help. Was the building racking?

I believe Paul is right in that these leave me looking for more.

Regards,
Bob

Oct 06, 2011 at 02:51 PM

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p.1 #5 · Wharfside

Seems to me the light wasn't very appealing for scenes on that scale. Did you take any close-ups?

Oct 06, 2011 at 04:18 PM

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p.1 #6 · Wharfside

Thanks for all the feedback.
I am inclined to agree that something is lacking.
Wish I didnt shoot so tight.

John,
You are the {welcome) exception. Glad one worked for you.

Scott

Oct 19, 2011 at 01:58 PM


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