Archive 2011 · YAR - 2

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · YAR - 2

Managed to get a white - but IMO too white - garish

so toned it a bit - thoughts, C&C welcome.

Thanks,

Bob

Sep 28, 2011 at 07:20 PM

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p.1 #2 · YAR - 2

Sorry, Bob. This one doesnt work for me. I am hard-pressed to define what's wrong but the processing seems to leave the flower flat but also includes some blown out areas in the center of the bloom. I'd also take down the background elements upper right.
Scott

Sep 28, 2011 at 08:16 PM

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p.1 #3 · YAR - 2

sbeme wrote:
Sorry, Bob. This one doesnt work for me. I am hard-pressed to define what's wrong but the processing seems to leave the flower flat but also includes some blown out areas in the center of the bloom. I'd also take down the background elements upper right.
Scott

Scott,

No problem and I agree, I much prefer the first YAR image...curious what others might think.

Thanks for commenting,

Bob

Sep 29, 2011 at 06:51 AM

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p.1 #4 · YAR - 2

AuntiPode wrote:
Perhaps some pixel bender and some tint?

Let the play begin!

Bob

Sep 29, 2011 at 06:52 AM


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