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Hi Marli,
Both shots have the horizon in the center half of the picture - was this purposeful?
For the first shot, I would like to see more of the sky and less of the ground/sand, since the sky is the more important feature in this picture.
For the second picture, the horizon at the halfway-mark composition does work for this picture. I like this picture - The dark clouds above give a sense of heavy compression onto the light, which I think works well here. If you could include a foreground figure (say a sailing boat sihouette or something) I think it may help to 3D-ize the image and give it more depth too.
Best regards,
Wenyao
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