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Title: Beneath But Towards....

"Beneath But Towards....... the city"


Desciption: Fort Pitt Bridge, Pittsburgh PA. Pittsburgh is famous for steel and I thought it will be nice to take a nice old school US steel bridge. The underside of the bridge is something that most people do not really see very often. The converging lines points to the city across the river. I like the gloomy look as the weather in pittsburgh is usually gloomy anyway (but it nice out these few days)

Marcus Gho

http://www.marcusgho.com/photo/Bridge.jpg


Edited by discreet on Sep 09, 2005 at 03:55 AM GMT

Edited by discreet on Sep 09, 2005 at 11:26 PM GMT



Sep 09, 2005 at 03:36 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · #175: Beneath But Towards....


Very nice composition. I love how the patterns of the bridge lead the eye straight into the city. Good job.


Sep 09, 2005 at 03:41 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · #175: Beneath But Towards....


Thanks, this is my first time out with my 1D mkII. My 17-40L is totally different now. Trying to get used to the wider perspective. Anyway I have a couple of other shots but i really felt this one is very relevant to this week's assignment


Sep 09, 2005 at 03:47 AM
 

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · #175: Beneath But Towards....


i like this alot. the concreate has such a cool texture, then your eyes are drawn to the underside of the bridge, and then into the city. top shot!


Sep 09, 2005 at 08:45 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #175: Beneath But Towards....


Great concept, but i would have liked a closer-up shot, using the 2 pillars as framing to lead our eyes into the city in the distance. The receeding bridge has already done a good job, just need a 'cleaner' image. Too much distracting skies and stuff on both sides for this to be a winner. Perhaps more contrast for that added pop? I would have taken out the railroads too at the bottom of the frame.

Gambatte!



Sep 10, 2005 at 06:03 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #175: Beneath But Towards....


mm... i would have given a tad more breathing room around the sides perhaps?
just a suggestion!

Cheers,
Wenyao



Sep 10, 2005 at 03:29 PM







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