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#466 Homage to Magritte - a pink umbrella


I finally got around to shooting this today, which I\'ve had in mind for a while now. What do y\'all think of this?




Sep 11, 2011 at 03:14 PM
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I think this is the strongest of the images I made this week. I wish I could have gotten my corkscrew photograph to have that WOW factor. I was getting close with the final re-shoot, I think, but something seemed to still be missing... As a friend pointed out, the spiral notebook was a navel-gazing boring shot, \"like taking a picture of your keyboard because you\'re too lazy to go find something good to shoot.\" The fan has interesting form, but then nothing else to say; I really liked the hair, but again I just couldn\'t figure out how to make it pull you in and go WOW. I like my chandelier but something isn\'t quite right there either (too closely cropped? too dark? dunno.) I love the \"red eye\" in the dog eye, but it fails on so many other levels (something to remember for a future shoot though! ;-) The cowlick is just boring; Fail! And the first flower has terrible bokeh, but when I went back to reshoot the flowers were dead. I think the spiraling beer was a contender, but in the end I think the coral vine has what it takes: simplicity, form, good eye leading, and it nails the assignment topic.

Thanks to everyone who took the time to C&C here! I\'d like to think that I\'m honing my skills with y\'all\'s help. :-D



Sep 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM
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#466 Turks Cap beheaded!




I think this is the strongest of the images I made this week. I wish I could have gotten my corkscrew photograph to have that WOW factor. I was getting close with the final re-shoot, I think, but something seemed to still be missing... As a friend pointed out, the spiral notebook was a navel-gazing boring shot, \"like taking a picture of your keyboard because you\'re too lazy to go find something good to shoot.\" The fan has interesting form, but then nothing else to say; I really liked the hair, but again I just couldn\'t figure out how to make it pull you in and go WOW. I like my chandelier but something isn\'t quite right there either (too closely cropped? too dark? dunno.) I love the \"red eye\" in the dog eye, but it fails on so many other levels (something to remember for a future shoot though! ;-) The cowlick is just boring; Fail! And the first flower has terrible bokeh, but when I went back to reshoot the flowers were dead. I think the spiraling beer was a contender, but in the end I think the coral vine has what it takes: simplicity, form, good eye leading, and it nails the assignment topic.

Thanks to everyone who took the time to C&C here! I\'d like to think that I\'m honing my skills with y\'all\'s help. :-D



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#466 Turks Cap beheaded!





Sep 10, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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#466 Turks Cap FIRE!





Sep 09, 2011 at 11:53 PM
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#466 spiraling into the drink....





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Sep 09, 2011 at 08:48 AM
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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





Sep 09, 2011 at 08:47 AM
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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





Sep 08, 2011 at 04:25 PM
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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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#466 you spin me right 'round baby, right 'round





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