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Bob Jarman
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Re: Fall Vineyards


Hey Jeff,

Welcome to FM and the forum.

For just starting out, I\'d say you\'ve chosen a difficult setting and, with a little more most post-processing you\'re well on your way.

I\'ve never had much luck with mist/fog and sunrises, somehow never convey what I was seeing or thinking when taking the capture.

I prefer #\'s 3 & 4 over the first two: #1 is too \'head-on\', imo, and looking straight into the sun, I think I\'d try either more on a diagonal or looking away from the sun. For me, the condo or whatever in the background of #2, in an image having more snap, is distracting in that it competes with the vines for attention - I guess you could say there is not central subject.

I\'ve taken the liberty of quick re-works on #\'s 3 & 4. In both cases, if you look at the histograms you can stratch the histogram at both ends to both brighten and darken the images. In #3 I bumped the contrast using the LCH curve in Capture NX2 and sharpened; #4 much of the same except I cloned out several poles at the right side and tried to get some color back into the image aside from the sunrise...

If you object, I\'ll pull the posts...


#3






#4







Geesh, that is lovely scenery...

Again welcome, thanks for sharing and we look forward to seeing more posts.

regards

Bob

Oh, it is often helpful to include the Exif data - I believe there is an option to include it in the Flickr upoad process, don\'t recall exactly where.

<EDIT> re-reading your post: f4 give you nice DFO, especially in #3 with both fore- and background being thrown out of focus, a higher f-stop would tend to \'flatten\' DOF which I do not believe would have helped - I think f4 is fine




Dec 23, 2008 at 08:34 PM
Bob Jarman
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Re: Fall Vineyards


Hey Jeff,

Welcome to FM and the forum.

For just starting out, I\'d say you\'ve chosen a difficult setting and, with a little more most post-processing you\'re well on your way.

I\'ve never had much luck with mist/fog and sunrises, somehow never convey what I was seeing or thinking when taking the capture.

I prefer #\'s 3 & 4 over the first two: #1 is too \'head-on\', imo, and looking straight into the sun, I think I\'d try either more on a diagonal or looking away from the sun. For me, the condo or whatever in the background of #2, in an image having more snap, is distracting in that it competes with the vines for attention - I guess you could say there is not central subject.

I\'ve taken the liberty of quick re-works on #\'s 3 & 4. In both cases, if you look at the histograms you can stratch the histogram at both ends to both brighten and darken the images. In #3 I bumped the contrast using the LCH curve in Capture NX2 and sharpened; #4 much of the same except I cloned out several poles at the right side and tried to get some color back into the image aside from the sunrise...

If you object, I\'ll pull the posts...


#3






#4







Geesh, that is lovely scenery...

Again welcome, thanks for sharing and we look forward to seeing more posts.

regards

Bob

Oh, it is often helpful to include the Exif data - I believe there is an option to include it in the Flickr upoad process, don\'t recall exactly where.



Dec 23, 2008 at 07:48 PM





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