The conditions look decent to me. Sorry the workshop got cancelled. Mark has a lot of knowledge on the post processing side, especially when it comes to printing. Would've been bummed myself.
Most of these, I feel, would be improved by taking the focus off the foreground. You have the foreground quite bright compared to the rest of the scene.
#2, for example, I would use those lines in the foreground to draw the eye towards the sunset. Darken the foreground slightly (Maybe by burning), then lighten the reflections in the pool and ocean leading to the sunset. I would also brighten the scene slightly more as a lot of your scenery (Such as the rocks in the middle and on the right) is really dark.
Overall, however, your shots are well exposed in camera and you have a good eye for composition. I would just focus on where you'd like the viewer's eyes to travel and edit it in order to accomplish that goal.
Oct 28, 2020 at 04:51 PM
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