A very interesting set particularly in the way she seems to change depending on the setting. In the first two indoor shots with her instruments and the rather formless dress, she seems so young. But, zoomed out in daylight settings and a more fashionable outfit, she seems more mature.
I am not sure what lenses you are using but, perhaps, the first one may have some distortion giving her hands a bit more prominence than might be desired. I am not sure if it is that or just the brightness of her hands. I would decrease their brightness to keep the overall attention on her face. Plus, the shadowing of her face seems to give that side some red and purple tones that are absent from the next shot. The second shot is more successful in my opinion. The even lighting contributes to the sensitive mood.
The daylight shots are mood elevators with the first bringing out a sense of joy as well as some great, vivid colors. I like the way her leggings match the window trim in number 4 but she is a bit swallowed up by the drama, color, and size of the brick wall. . In the nest shot, the ivy creates a strong background buther bright face and clear eyes keep the focus on her. #6 gives her an air of maturity and I think her hair looks terrific here. Bright and finely detailed. #6 is nice but not as notable as the others. Her legs seem awkwardly posed to me. To my eye, she seems a bit overwhelmed by the surroundings in the last two. She seems a little washed out in #7 perhaps from the flash. And, the background seems too bright and vivid in the last. The same look and tone but in a dark setting might appeal to me more--perhaps a studio shot.
I hope you don't mind all the notes. I like the entire set. Saying 'great job' would also be appropriate and I am by no means a pro. So, two cents is my nominal fee. One more quibble: I might lose the watch in a couple of the shots. I like the nice bracelet in the second shot.
