I think its a good portrait. Some of the sitter seems to be coming through.
As usual it really depends on the intent. If this is intended to be a real formal type portrait then the head for a masculine pose should tilt towards the low shoulder. Creating a kind og C shape. A tilt to the high shoulder would create an S which is considered by some as a feminine . But again it all goes down to intent.
I personally like the simple lighting. It forces me to see the person and not the technique used to create the image. I say good as is.....
Happy VD to all the veterans out there and to all that are now serving. Thanks so much....
Thats my 2 cents.
Nov 11, 2013 at 02:53 PM
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