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C&C welcome. Thanks for viewing! :-D







Sep 11, 2010 at 01:45 PM
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p.1 #2 · #414 Gold Bands


Great composition. I especially love the "love never ends" part. What text is that from?


Sep 11, 2010 at 02:09 PM
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p.1 #3 · #414 Gold Bands


Nicely done!


Sep 11, 2010 at 02:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · #414 Gold Bands


Exquisitely done - nice job! I especially like the wear on the rings.


Sep 11, 2010 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #5 · #414 Gold Bands


This is very, very nice.


Sep 11, 2010 at 09:49 PM
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p.1 #6 · #414 Gold Bands


I'm floored. Nice nice nice nice.


Sep 13, 2010 at 12:17 PM
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p.1 #7 · #414 Gold Bands


I like the rugged look of the wedding bands that suggest it is a bond that is tested, fits the text well.

To nitpick a little, I think the picture look a little stark. I can't really say what's wrong with it, may be it would benefit from some vignetting or a darker background.



Sep 14, 2010 at 10:15 AM
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p.1 #8 · #414 Gold Bands


Thank you all for the feedback!

@blackbird: It is 1 Corinthians chapter 13. The Bible's definition of love is quite deep.

@ corvus and Navy: I was debating that. These are my rings (me and my wife), and we've been married 11 years. I actually toned down the wear a bit and was wondering whether or not to go further. It's great to know that the "realness" is appreciated :-)

@ Navy: I see your point regarding the starkness. Perhaps a lighter background. I used window light and wanted the effect of light coming in softly from camera-right, and I think I achieved that soft, directional look. I will keep your observation in mind for future images - I sometimes tend to light things more dramatically than they need to be :-)

Again, thanks all!



Sep 14, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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p.1 #9 · #414 Gold Bands


I like how you photographed the rings, and the fact that they - obviously - are old, should tell the story... the text is a bit too much for my taste


Sep 14, 2010 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #10 · #414 Gold Bands


ruuskan wrote:
I like how you photographed the rings, and the fact that they - obviously - are old, should tell the story... the text is a bit too much for my taste


Thank you for the comment. Though I must respectfully disagree. My opinion is that an image of only two rings, without the text, would not have as much impact. Maybe that's just me

Thanks again!



Sep 14, 2010 at 01:17 PM
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p.1 #11 · #414 Gold Bands


I like the text and also how the text reflects into the rings.


Sep 15, 2010 at 09:08 AM
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p.1 #12 · #414 Gold Bands


Thanks J!

I did have a version where the word "love" was reflecting directly into the ring, but I thought it threw off the overall comp.

Thanks again!



Sep 15, 2010 at 09:31 AM
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p.1 #13 · #414 Gold Bands


What a great photo. I love it when a fairly simple image speaks VOLUMES...
Very nice!
JD



Sep 17, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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