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p.2 #1 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


bright sunlight and harsh hair shadows across the face -- delete! it's not cruel, it's just common sense


Feb 08, 2010 at 06:05 PM
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p.2 #2 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


It's more of a disrespect to a person's time to suggest they waste another moment trying to "fix" a shot not worth keeping. Delete and save yourself the headache.


Feb 08, 2010 at 06:07 PM
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p.2 #3 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


ValerieUSA wrote:
sorry, but everyone is capable of seeing with a critical eye and deleting the unworthy shots - it's a great advantage of digital photography. I do it all the time.


This habit is the biggest demise of photography...
Nothing should be deleted until it's know 'why' it should be deleted... it's called learning from our mistakes.
Even after learning from our mistake... there's still no need to delete things. Imagine if this young lady was tragically taken from this earth in a car accident or something a few days after the shoot... they would still be lasting images for her family.

I ban my students from using the delete feature on their cameras.




Feb 08, 2010 at 06:21 PM
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p.2 #4 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


ValerieUSA wrote:
It's more of a disrespect to a person's time to suggest they waste another moment trying to "fix" a shot not worth keeping. Delete and save yourself the headache.


... and if these images were not posted here the OP would possibly never have learnt about the relationship between FL, camera to subject distance and perspective.



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:23 PM
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p.2 #5 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


dawnkyung wrote:
... and look into a longer FL.



If you don't have a longer lens you can get the same idea about perspective by shooting loose and cropping.
So, shoot the first wide shot cropped how I mentioned (H&S or waist up) and then walk back 15' and shoot with your longest lens you own. (then crop that image to the same cropping as the closer image) Note: the more you crop the more image resolution you lose so only crop heavily if your testing or the camera can handle it.



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:27 PM
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p.2 #6 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Honestly, I don't think lenses or sharpness are the key concerns here. Out of all of these images, #2 is excellent. As for the rest, I agree with Valerie. Or put in a way that would appease Snaga, I would have committed them to some dark corner of an archived backup somewhere. Your biggest problem is the angle from which these are shot. Very fewpeople who look their best when shot from bottom up. Also, you have flat and uninteresting lighting on almost every image except for 2.

That said, #2 is a truly fantastic portrait. I especially like your post work. The rest are not anywhere near that level.

Arka C.

Edited on Feb 08, 2010 at 06:49 PM · View previous versions



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:49 PM
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p.2 #7 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Whatever Valerie he was asking about sharpness not about light. Look at your comments if you really believe them then you have issues in your life. Later; not going to waste any more time if you cant see it...

ValerieUSA wrote:
It's more of a disrespect to a person's time to suggest they waste another moment trying to "fix" a shot not worth keeping. Delete and save yourself the headache.



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:49 PM
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p.2 #8 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Burk Young wrote:
Whatever Valerie he was asking about sharpness not about light. Look at your comments if you really believe them then you have issues in your life. Later; not going to waste any more time if you cant see it...


Yeah but that emphasis on sharpness is misplaced; there are more fundamental ways to improve the technique used to capture these images. Moreover, I think the OP has thus far welcomed comments on aspects of the image that don't pertain to their sharpness.

Arka C.



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:51 PM
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p.2 #9 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


ValerieUSA wrote:
Very bad lighting on most - I would have deleted them



Point being the above statement was a useless way of sharing C&C. Could have offered something other than deleting the images...



Feb 08, 2010 at 06:56 PM
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p.2 #10 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


... and I agree otehr input has been welcomed as it is by me and my images... but for the above comment, it seems without worth for C&C.


Feb 08, 2010 at 06:57 PM
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p.2 #11 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Delete is a valuable tool - a photography teacher should not ignore its worth.

Harsh sunlight and hair shadows as found in three of the posted photos make bad portraits and a photographer needs to recognize that.

See the fatal flaw,
know it doesn't work,
delete it,
try something else.
Basic.

It's not meant to offend. If offense is taken, you are not seeing what is right in front of you. How can you be a photographer?



Feb 08, 2010 at 07:09 PM
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p.2 #12 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Then say that instead of some dumbass remark.


Feb 08, 2010 at 07:13 PM
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p.2 #13 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


sometimes to see the fatal flaw, students or people learning need to have it pointed out to them. these things are learned.

obviously if you have knowledge and are willing to take the time to read someones post and comment, then please share what it is that makes it makes it deletable. thats all i'm saying. can't try something else if you don't know what else to try.




Feb 08, 2010 at 07:18 PM
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p.2 #14 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


That is what I said.
"Bad lighting on on most - I would delete them."
What did you think I meant?

Did you not see the harsh sunlight and hair shadows? I had to point that out to you?
That's bad lighting.

What to do with such pictures?
Delete them.

Why couldn't you get it?
Why did you immediately take offense? Why make the useless complaint that I must have "issues"?









Feb 08, 2010 at 07:21 PM
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p.2 #15 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Sounds like you need some reflection in your life :-) good luck to you




Feb 08, 2010 at 07:27 PM
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p.2 #16 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Valerie, hitting the delete button doesn't fix dark shadows.
Suggest a fix/technique rather than a useless comment as 'delete them' or you may as well not bother contributing to the thread.



Feb 08, 2010 at 07:34 PM
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p.2 #17 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


It's not rocket science.
Yes, delete is THE fix for a photo with bad lighting.
But first a person has to see it and recognize it for it's worth, and its unworthiness. If that task is beyond one's abilities, then there is no point to discussing techniques.



Feb 08, 2010 at 07:56 PM
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p.2 #18 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


I hadn't looked at this thread all day...wow!

To everyone who has helpful criticism to offer, thanks!

"It's not rocket science.Yes, delete is THE fix for a photo with bad lighting. But first a person has to see it and recognize it for it's worth, and its unworthiness. If that task is beyond one's abilities, then there is no point to discussing techniques."

Valerie...thanks for pointing out that if an image sucks it should be deleted. Pretty sure even someone like myself could figure that out. What I'm really looking for is honest critique, hopefully without a condescending tone to help me learn and develop an eye for what's worth keeping and what isn't.

I honestly appreciate everyone who has offered real advice and even comments on why the images that suck do suck - those are the things that really help. I visit this forum to learn more and I'll keep posting my images to keep learning.

Thanks again.



Feb 08, 2010 at 08:37 PM
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p.2 #19 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


ValerieUSA wrote:
It's not rocket science.
Yes, delete is THE fix for a photo with bad lighting.
But first a person has to see it and recognize it for it's worth, and its unworthiness. If that task is beyond one's abilities, then there is no point to discussing techniques.



no point wasting my time with an attitude like that... I feel so, so sad for you...



Feb 08, 2010 at 08:38 PM
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p.2 #20 · Michelle...I'm still trying!


Such drama in these critique forums... come on. Some people delete off the card, while others condemn the images they don't like to an archive. One need not feel so sad for either.

Also, I find the sensitivity to harsh, cursory critique to be quite extreme on this particular forum. I am a member of painting/drawing forums where harsh crits are the norm. The same approach to critique here is perceived as condescending or otherwise objectionable in tone. In general, I think that's the wrong way to look at it.

A few months ago I gave a lengthy critique to someone in another FM board about why his drawing was problematic... it was several paragraphs of commetary summing up areas where the drawing was deeply flawed. In response, the OP and one other person chastised me for being mean, though not necessarily unhelpful.

Tone is a nuanced thing that is difficult to convey in a written medium, but critique is relatively easy to convey. Why not give anyone who took the time to write something about your image the benefit of the doubt? Harsh or not, the person was probably motivated in some part to help you improve. Maybe the person had other motivations (self-aggrandizement, etc.), but you can take away from the remarks that which is beneficial to your art without converting a thread into epic melodrama.

Arka C.




Feb 08, 2010 at 08:47 PM
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