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p.2 #1 · Hallowmoon + Revision(New)

Very nicely done. The reds are a bit strong...but other than that fantastic work.

Nov 03, 2009 at 02:30 AM

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p.2 #2 · Hallowmoon + Revision(New)

The second one gets my vote. Your framing is really nice also.

Randy

Nov 03, 2009 at 02:51 AM

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p.2 #3 · Hallowmoon + Revision(New)

Thank you for the additional critiques.

I have added a third version, which I hope incorporates the suggestions presented here.

I attempted to reduce the reds a tad, and cut back somewhat on the contrast of version 2. Please let me know if it worked.

Cheers,
Ed

Nov 03, 2009 at 12:01 PM

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p.2 #4 · Hallowmoon + Revision(New)

Hi Ed ,

On a previous hasty viewing I had thought that the second version was a tad over-cooked , and that even the first version would benefit from a touch of desaturation . The latter view is a purely personal taste , and I will happily settle for the third and final(?) version now presented !

Great composition and interpretation , too .

Nov 03, 2009 at 12:34 PM

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