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Archive 2009 · High School Senior Sports Portrait

  
 
Tony Brown
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p.2 #1 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


J........#1 & #3 are my favorites.

these are really good....i like the horizontal..especially on #3. would have been nice to see a full body image of the same pose...especially while he was dropping back for a pass.


GREAT JOB.



Aug 07, 2009 at 08:58 PM
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p.2 #2 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


jhartman wrote:
"Have to agree about the horizontal vs vertical on #1 & #2. Still great shots but would have been improved with different orientation IMHO."

It's a good thing photography isn't necessarily about rules.


I personally have no regards for the rules in regards to my comments. My observations were based entirely on just looking at the picture as it is. As I said I still think the pictures are great as you have them but I personally would have liked them better if they were cropped in a different way. So in no way am I trying to knock your work.

I try to be aware of rules because sometimes they come in handy and keep you out of trouble. When I look at a picture I just basically go with "is it visually pleasing to me, if not then why." This generally has nothing to do with rules.

At the end of the day I would much prefer to know the rules and break them intentionally, as opposed to not knowing them at all.


Edited on Aug 08, 2009 at 09:55 AM · View previous versions



Aug 07, 2009 at 10:18 PM
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p.2 #3 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


I like #4, your lighting is sick. #3 is good technically, but his expression is lack luster. He should have that very deep sense of focus, as if 5 guys are trying to tackle him while he looks for a receiver.


Aug 08, 2009 at 09:17 AM
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p.2 #4 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


jhartman wrote:
Except that the stadium lights were added in post.



With the "spotlight" effects tools?

Thanks!



Sep 10, 2009 at 06:59 AM
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p.2 #5 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


LOVE THIS!
#1+#3 are amazingly lit and awesomely edited
liked the setup shot also.
i dig it a lot.



Sep 10, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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p.2 #6 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


Great shots especially #1...

Love your PP work.

Could you share a little on how you metered these and were you using PWs?



Sep 10, 2009 at 11:17 AM
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p.2 #7 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


"Could you share a little on how you metered these and were you using PWs?"

• Five 580s - two strapped together on each of two stands as kickers, plus one shooting through a small softbox. All on E-TTL and RadioPoppers, no adjustments. Ambient light set for -2 stops under.

jh



Sep 10, 2009 at 12:18 PM
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p.2 #8 · High School Senior Sports Portrait


#1 would have been my favorite, but you cut his head off.


Sep 10, 2009 at 07:35 PM
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