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RT v Genugten
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Sharpening a garden tool

Thanks for viewing, tips and comments!

RT.

edit:

Version 2.
I went a bit closer in a slightly different angle. Had to use a longer lens, because I wouldn't want to burn my dear old 85
Modified the fillstrobe a tad by creating a barndoor slit with a piece of cardboard,
and added a maclite to highlight the blade (might have overdone that)
Slightly longer exposure for the sparkles and about one Fstop smaller
Also added a bit more symmetry
Tried to keep the original coloring and feel, but added a bit more drama, with help of a goldreflector

Let me know if it improved -or not-

Thanks all for the comments and tips!

RT.

Version Final.
Some last PP modifications
Thanks to all who helped in this image,
Special thanks to Mike for his Masterclasses!

RT.






Edited on Jul 29, 2009 at 05:48 AM · View previous versions



Jul 26, 2009 at 06:35 AM
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I love the motion and color in this one. Nice setup.

Chad



Jul 26, 2009 at 09:49 AM
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I feel the same but I wish you'd go a bit closer to emphasize the action.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Jul 26, 2009 at 11:13 AM
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wonderful sparks, nice exposure.


Jul 26, 2009 at 11:21 AM
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Great exposure to get everything so sharp

Norm.



Jul 26, 2009 at 07:00 PM
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Hi RT,
I like it. Well executed on all levels. I feel the main light/flash is a bit forced straight on, muting some of the drama to be had. What can I say, I like drama. Great shot!



Jul 27, 2009 at 12:42 AM
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Thanks all for commenting,
@Mike: Ill try on one without the mainfill,

Thanks!

RT.

edit: Im going to modify the mainfill, Just took some scissors and created something that looks like a barndoor.

Edited on Jul 27, 2009 at 03:04 AM · View previous versions



Jul 27, 2009 at 01:34 AM
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RT v Genugten wrote:
Thanks all for commenting,
@Mike: Ill try on one without the mainfill,

Thanks!

RT.


RT, I think your going to need some fill, or it's going to throw off your exposure, only capturing the sparks, if you shoot longer to compensate you’ll lose detail in the sparks creating just one big bright flow. If your by yourself or don't have super versatile light stands, grab a little goose-neck lamp with a 100w daylight bulb and duct tape a piece of white paper over the hood. Turn off all other lights and move the goose-neck lamp around the area with your free hand and position your glove hand as you were, but with the grinder off. See if anything strikes you as cool. Now with your glove hand hit your time delay also auto setting your exposure comp if let say you chose to shoot aperture priority. Your glove hand and sparks wont be in the shot for accurate exp but it will be close enough to stop up or down. Take a couple shots. You may need another light source/reflector for accent. Now fire up the grinder and you will get a super bonus to your already cool image. Having another person would help a lot. As you can tell, I have no friends Camera settings will be crucial, speed, ISO, DOF etc. but that is half the fun right? Just some thoughts RT. Not that you need it. There is no right or wrong way to do this stuff we try to pull off every week I think your post is fine as it is



Jul 27, 2009 at 02:29 AM
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I like the color and the details/texture of the glove contrasted with the sparks.

Chris



Jul 27, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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tinamarie52 wrote:
I like the color and the details/texture of the glove contrasted with the sparks.

Chris


Thanks for comments Chris!

RT.



Jul 27, 2009 at 11:55 AM
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You fine tuned this well. Good action.


Jul 27, 2009 at 11:06 PM
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The lack of light makes it a better pic. Less is more…..

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Jul 28, 2009 at 06:26 AM
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I like this shot much more than the first. It's a fine submission.

Nick



Jul 28, 2009 at 06:29 AM
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Bill Sutherland wrote:
You fine tuned this well. Good action.


Thanks Bill!
Glad you like it!

RT.



Jul 28, 2009 at 06:59 AM
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Yakim Peled wrote:
The lack of light makes it a better pic. Less is more…..

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Thanks Yakim!
In this second version I tried to incorporate all previous tips and comments!

This one is a tad closer than the first, and in a slightly better angle,

Cheers,

RT.



Jul 28, 2009 at 07:00 AM
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NumberFive wrote:
I like this shot much more than the first. It's a fine submission.

Nick



Thanks Nick for viewing and comments!

RT.



Jul 28, 2009 at 07:01 AM
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Love this shot, the lighting is great, well worth all the effort you put it!

Andy



Jul 28, 2009 at 04:16 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · #355 Sharpening


Excellent lighting. It goes along with the color of the sparks very well.



Jul 28, 2009 at 04:20 PM
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Love the new version. Much more drama and much richer tone.

Great entry,
Chad



Jul 28, 2009 at 10:37 PM
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Vipermike wrote:
RT, I'm only trying to help because I care and no other reason.


Can't help but love this guy. WA's Luis Hamilton.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Jul 29, 2009 at 01:43 AM
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