leftbob I didn't like the straight B&W the background probably part of the reason
MC Yorke thanks
bryanlindsey thanks for looking
stevenD I was stuck with this sloped ceiling in the attic which caused the different tones it was the only empty background
Matt Khoury thanks
Kopey I think it was the low ambient light in the attic I only had a Gary Fong on camera for the lighting but I agree smaller pupils would be better and larger catch lights I think